Thanks a heap. Personally, I believe the story would need more
work to have a chance at publication. My editing left several
mistakes, and my wording could have been better, as I was really
pressed for time. I may pursue your suggestions on a more refined
version if... big if... I can ever find the time to do it.

Don't worry, Joe -- magazines have these creatures called "Editors" who will
destroy, er, I mean "FIX" any stylistic devices, er, I mean "PROBLEMS" they
find in your prose...

:-)
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Jay Honeck
Iowa City, IA
Pathfinder N56993
www.AlexisParkInn.com
"Your Aviation Destination"