JJS wrote:

Thanks a heap. Personally, I believe the story would need more
work to have a chance at publication.

Well, I managed to get one article published about ten years ago, and I tinkered with
it for something like six months before I thought it was good enough to send out.
Take your time.

George Patterson
This marriage is off to a shaky start. The groom just asked the band to
play "Your cheatin' heart", and the bride just requested "Don't come home
a'drinkin' with lovin' on your mind".