...turbulence or icing conditions and that starts to cause
delamination problems with Cirrus's high tech polymer/foam shell.

Cite? Upon what do you base these "pretty clear facts"?

and end up stalling out the engine.

What does the wing delaminating have to do with the engine? And what
does "stall" mean in this context?

To a pilot, these words have different meanings.

Oh by the way the plane does have a 33% higher failure
ratio than other planes in the competing class...

Newsday is hardly a reliable source of engineering statistics. And for
an engineering student at a well known and respected university to use
"33% higher failure ratio" (with no numerator or denomenator specified)
is exceptionally sloppy. Perhaps you mean "rate", in which case you
still need to specify "per what" if you want to say something meaningful.

I suspect you mean well, but more care in your dissertation would be
appropriate here.

Jose
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