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![]() ".Blueskies." wrote in message . net... I like the sensational word that all were using...raining debris and fire on the ground...flames leaping from the windows...smoke billowing out... Nobody reads passive voice. "An building was struck by an airplane. There was a fire. Burning debris was falling to the ground and there was smoke." "Smoke billowed out" includes an active verb, whereas "there was smoke coming out" is weak. -c "Nothing happened today when an airplane collided with a building in New York City except that there was a little fire and two dead occupants." . |
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